A very productive outcome to my publishing the
ESSAY was an opportunity to re-open a dialogue with Akuzawa Minoru. I'd made some mistakes about his training history, and in addition, he wished to explain further - as well as amplify - the discussion on the principles he is training. With the assistance of Rob John as well, we hammered out a rewrite that, although surely not a complete explication of Aunkai, is, per Akuzawa-san and Rob, accurate as far as it goes.