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Old 01-26-2011, 01:05 PM   #39
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Re: Limerick challenge!

Actually David...

Line one of your first rhyme is dicey,
though the rest of it flows rather nicely
the second one lacks
the last lines a bit slack
but the third's put together quite nicely.

But thanks for pointing out the importance of meter in a Limerick. I bet lots of people did not realize that poetry has rules.
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