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Old 02-27-2006, 01:54 AM   #5
Bronson
 
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Re: Looking for a honest opinion

Nice video.

Found a couple of small typos.

1) On the screen that says: "O'Sensei is considered the greatest martial artisit in history..." I believe it should be O-Sensei and not O'Sensei. Whenever I see it with an apostrophe it always make me think of O'Sensei as the great teaching leprechaun

2) I'm guessing the screen that says: "has accored his legenday status." Is supposed to say accorded instead of accored.

I think Steven is right about doubling up on the Shihan/Sensei thing.

I'd also agree with Jory that some of the segments may be a tad long.

Overall a nice video, you did a goo job with it.

Bronson

"A pacifist is not really a pacifist if he is unable to make a choice between violence and non-violence. A true pacifist is able to kill or maim in the blink of an eye, but at the moment of impending destruction of the enemy he chooses non-violence."
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