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netrek
01-03-2011, 11:30 PM
Greetings,

Here is a a poem I wrote about a samurai duel. It honors the samurai of Japan.

http://www.fidei.org/2011/01/duel-at-dawn-ii.html

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Feel free to use the poem
as you see fit.

ninjaqutie
01-04-2011, 04:44 PM
I like it

netrek
01-04-2011, 05:25 PM
I like it

Thanks!

mathewjgano
01-09-2011, 03:21 AM
Greetings,

Here is a a poem I wrote about a samurai duel. It honors the samurai of Japan.

http://www.fidei.org/2011/01/duel-at-dawn-ii.html

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Feel free to use the poem
as you see fit.

For me it was beautifully sad. I really enjoyed it! Thank you.
Take care,
Matt

guest1234567
01-09-2011, 03:36 AM
Very sensitive, thanks